one day i happened to pass by a house
i saw a girl was sitting in front of her computer
when i passed the house again for second time
she was still sittin in front of the computer
and excitingly typing the keyboard
i could hear the sound of her keyboard echoing outside
and i happened to conclude that she never went out to hang out
for she was always spending her time there at her room
the other week, i met the girl at my friend’s wedding party
she was there with all her friends
she looked so happy but sad
for some reasons i saw her crying on the corner alone
so i decided to give her flowers
just to tell her that she was the beautiful girl
on earth i ever met in my life time
and then she cried
i was thinking if i made mistake
but she said it wasnt my fault
she was touched by my sincere willing
since nobody had ever given her flower before in her life time
she was longing that time
well i was so special
but when she was about to kiss me
i forgot to tell her
that i was not human at all



Ur stories really make me think and thats something i like. keep on writing babe(liz)u do a great job. -Jones
Hey Liz my great sister,your story and poem are not fascinating and unique, and it also melted my heart.It also inspires me too greatly.Sometimes when I am down, while reading this, it enlightens me too.Liz you are doing great.
LOL. And I thought I was the only one not human. It is a sad gesture to the girl. Hopefully she meets a real human sometime. The change of tone for this story fits very well. Thanks Liz
Weird
But cute
THIS STORY WAS GOOD BUT IT WAS ALSO WEIRD
Useful post. good luck.